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Could you please help me correct the grammatical mistakes and make this paragraph more authentic?Thank you! To my idol:Do you guys remember your first stage in China?Recently I saw a video about you guys captured by a fan of the singer who was standing in front of you.And at the time you guys looked so green.LOL By the way, Tom waved because he saw the fans under the stage at that time? I really want to have a opportunity to see your stage! PS. The fan who shot the video was not a fan of my idol, but a fan of the singer who was standing in front of my idol on the stage.
Nov 22, 2021 8:21 AM
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To my idol : Do you guys remember your first stage in China? Recently I was watching a video filmed by a fan of the singer you guys performed with. The singer was standing in front of you and you guys looked so green! LOL By the way, did Tom waved because he saw the fans near the stage? I really want to have an opportunity to see your stage! The above is alright however, I would use the name of the idol and singer in this! I also wouldn't need to say the video was taken by the singer's fan. Maybe something like this : Example : Idol is BTS Singer is Rain To BTS : Do you guys remember your first stage in China? Recently I was watching a video of your performance with Rain. Rain was standing in front of you guys and somehow you guys looked so green! LOL. By the way, was Tom waving to the fans near the stage? I really hope to have an opportunity to see your stage!
November 22, 2021
To my idol:Do you guys remember your first show in China?Recently I saw a video of you guys taken by a fan of the singer who was standing in front of you. At the time, you guys looked so green. LOL By the way, did Tom wave at the fans he saw below the stage, in that show? I really want to have a opportunity to see you on stage! PS. The fan who shot the video was not a fan of my idol, but a fan of the singer who was standing in front of my idol.
November 22, 2021
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