Olga Sapozhnikova
Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 20 A plot of earth You're given a plot of land and have the financial resources to do what you please. What's the plan? It would be a house of wood and glass on the bank of the ocean with a pier for yachts. I'm a water creature and would like to live near the big water. I love to swim and going along the shore. Someday I would get a license for a yacht and buy one. I dream about traveling by yacht all over the world. But I have never been on a boat deep in the sea or ocean, hope I don't have seasickness. #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
Feb 20, 2021 5:24 PM
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Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 20 A plot of earth You're given a plot of land and have the financial resources to do what you please. What's the plan? It would be a house of wood and glass on the bank of the ocean with a pier for yachts. I'm a water person and would like to live near a big body of water. I love to swim and walk along the shore. Someday I will get a license for a yacht and buy one. I dream about traveling by yacht all over the world. But I have never been on a boat deep in the sea or ocean, hope I don't have seasickness. #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
It is better to say "water person" when speaking about something that you enjoy or prefer. For example: "I'm a coffee person." or "Do you have a cat? No, I'm a dog person."
February 20, 2021
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