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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I went out all day. I got up at 9am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up cuz it was perfect day for laundry. after that I went to a shopping mall my neighborhood so that I would change the cell phone provider. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. Anyways, It’s been a long day. So I’ll go to the bed earlier than usual. have a good night.
Feb 21, 2021 11:42 AM
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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I was out all day. I got up at 9am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up because it was the perfect day for laundry. Afterwards I went to the mall in my neighborhood so that I could change cell phone providers. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. Anyways, it’s been a long day so I’ll go to the bed earlier than usual. Have a good night.
Very good! People do say “cuz” for because but it’s more common in texting, not when writing a paragraph. Also a shopping mall is correct but it’s perfectly fine to shorten it to just mall. Hope this helps!
Feb 21, 2021 12:57 PM
Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I was all day. I got up at 9am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up, because it was a perfect day for laundry (try to avoid using the same word twice in a sentence - because it was a perfect day for it - because it was a perfect day for washibg clothes). after that I went to a shopping mall in my neighborhood so that I could change my cell phone provider. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. (You went to bed then got up again?) Anyway, it’s been a long day. So I’ll go to bed earlier than usual. Have a good night.
很好晚安!
Feb 21, 2021 12:48 PM
Today, I went out all day. I got up at 9 am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up because it was a perfect day for laundry. after that, I went to a shopping mall in my neighborhood to change the cell phone provider. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. Anyways, It’s been a long day. So I’ll go to bed earlier than usual. have a good night.
Feb 21, 2021 11:48 AM
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