Kseniia
Write about the following topic. Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. _________________________ PART 1 First of all, preserving connection with our past is one of the most admirable things. One of the reason why people turn to their history might be a necessity to accumulate knowledge, experience and to receive inspiration. Well known that most of innovations comes from the past. For example, traditional church, which was a historical centre of studying, tuition and academic research, gave birth to a musical notes, glasses, genetic teaching and other progressive stuff. Hence, our past is a good platform and basis for new discovering.
Feb 21, 2021 1:35 PM
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Write about the following topic. Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. _________________________ PART 1 First of all, preserving a connection with our past is one of the most admirable things we, as humans, do. One of the reason people turn to their history might be a need to accumulate knowledge and experience of others and to receive inspiration. It is well known that many innovations have come from the past. For example, the traditional church, which was a historical centre of studying, tuition and academic research, gave birth to a musical notation, optometry innovations such as glasses, the teaching of genetics and other progressive ideas. Hence, our past is a good platform and basis for new discovery (discoveries).
The essay topic talks about traditions, not about history. So your essay does not really answer the question. Rethink your answer. You need to think about some traditions and why we keep them and when think about why we SHOULD or SHOULD NOT keep them.
Feb 21, 2021 4:58 PM
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Kseniia
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English, Russian
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