Kseniia
Write about the following topic. Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. _________________________ CONCLUSION To conclude, I certain that traditions will not become an only part of our past, but will give us a myriad of ideas and invitations. Moreover, modern technology will be a source for new traditional values.
Feb 21, 2021 1:39 PM
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Write about the following topic. Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future. It has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. _________________________ CONCLUSION To conclude, I ascertain that traditions will not become an only part of our past, but will give us a myriad of ideas and invitations. Moreover, modern technology will be a source for new traditional values.
“Certain” can be an adjective or a pronoun, but in this case you are trying to use it as a verb. Instead, use “ascertain” which means to show without a doubt. That’s what I think you were trying to go with. Nice job! This is better than most English speaking natives could do!
Feb 21, 2021 2:20 PM
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Kseniia
Language Skills
English, Russian
Learning Language
English