diame
I had super great time at work with my comrades,we had fun during our break and exchange ideas together .
Feb 23, 2021 7:44 PM
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I had a super great time at work with my colleagues, we had fun during our break and exchanged ideas.
I removed “together” because although it’s not wrong, it adds no meaning here as it is clear who you were exchanging ideas with. 🙂
Feb 23, 2021 10:53 PM
I had super great time at work with my colleagues, we had fun during our break and exchanged ideas together .
comrades = Russian communists :-)
Feb 23, 2021 9:49 PM
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diame
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