Yuki
Could you please correct. I want to eat chocolates because I like snack. There are a lot of snacks in Japan. For example , “Puregumi”,“Poiful” , “Chipster”, “Mashmal” and so on. Dagasi is Japanese snack. It’s very delicious . I like it. I like my mother too. My mother grate like is space.
Sep 22, 2021 9:59 AM
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Could you please correct this? I want to eat chocolates because I like snacks. There are a lot of snacks in Japan. For example, “Puregumi”, “Poiful”, “Chipster”, “Mashmal” and so on. Dagasi is a Japanese snack. It’s very delicious . I like it. I like my mother too. My mother is great. (not sure what you mean here)
Hi Yuki, I've corrected it. What are Puregumi, Poiful, Chipster, Mashmal and Dagasi's snacks like? Anyway, I can help you improve your English. Please check out my teacher profile and feel free to book a lesson :)
Sep 23, 2021 6:15 AM
Could you please correct it. I want to eat chocolates because I like snacks. There are many snacks in Japan. For example, “Puregumi”,“Poiful” , “Chipster”, “Mashmal” and so on. Dagasi is a Japanese snack. It’s very delicious. I like it. My mother likes it too My mother grate like is space. (not sure what this means)
Sep 22, 2021 10:51 AM
Could you please correct. I want to eat chocolates because I like snacks. There are a lot of snacks in Japan. For example , “Puregumi”,“Poiful” , “Chipster”, “Mashmal” and so on. Dagasi is a Japanese snack. It’s very delicious . I like it. I like my mother too. My mother is great like space.
Sep 22, 2021 10:44 AM
I want to eat chocolates because I like snacks. There are many snacks in Japan. For example, "Pre-game", "Potful", "Hipster", "Maximal" and so on. Sagas is a Japanese snack. It's very delicious. I like. I also love my mother. My mother scratches like space.
Sep 22, 2021 10:33 AM
Could you please correct. I want to eat chocolates because I like snacks. There are a lot of snacks in Japan. For example, “Puregumi”, “Poiful” , “Chipster”, “Mashmal” and so on. Dagasi is a Japanese snack. It’s very delicious . I like it. I like my mother too. My mother is great like space.
Good job!
Sep 22, 2021 10:05 AM
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Yuki
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English