Sergio Siebra
Sep 22, 2021 3:18 PM
Corrections · 5
Hello Sergio, Gladly! Here are my corrections: I started my day with an italki class with teacher Raymond. After that I went to work. At about noon, I took my kids to school, had lunch with them, and then returned to work again. I worked until 6 pm and then went to the gym. Then I went home. The prompt is asking what happened today, but I noticed you are describing what you generally do each day. If that's what you would like to express, you would say it like so: I usually start with my day with an italki class with Raymond. After that, I go to work. At noon I bring my kids to school where we have lunch before I return to work. I work until about 6 pm and then I go to the gym before finally returning home for the evening. And lastly to answer your question, we say "to school". I take my kids to school. I go to school Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, etc. Let me know if you have any other questions!
Sep 22, 2021 3:51 PM
Hello Sergio, good talking. Some suggestions: Make sure you say the {-th} sound in (with). Also, misspoken words you said I put in parenthesis in "I started ( you said -start) my day having a class with (mispronounce- wif) Teacher Raymond on the (didn't say- in) iTalki app. Then after that I went (didn't say -went) back to my work". "I will take my kids to (not -with or at) school" . Also, "I will go to the gym (not- at the gym). Overall good!
Sep 22, 2021 9:28 PM
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Sergio Siebra
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English, Portuguese
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