Khaled Bassam
Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph? Social media, like anything else, has advantages and disadvantages. In the past, before the time of social media, people struggled with access to information, especially these who had academic career. Even normal people, if they wanted to get a piece of information, they should reach out to that person who has that kind of required information. Currently, things are much easier. If you want a piece of information, only write a post on Facebook asking about that while you're sitting on the couch. That one of the advantages of social media. One big disadvantage of social media is bullying comments. This issue has impeded many people from consulting others about what they are struggle with for fear of bullying comments which would hurt their feelings.
Oct 26, 2020 9:33 AM
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Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph? Social media, like anything else, has advantages and disadvantages. In the past, before the time of social media, people struggled with access to information, especially these who had academic careers. Even normal people, if they wanted to get some information about something, would reach out to those who had specific knowledge about the subject. Currently, things are much easier. If you want any information, you only have to write a post on Facebook about it while you're sitting on the couch. That one of the advantages of social media. One big disadvantage of social media is the bullying comments. This issue has impeded many people from consulting others about what they struggle with, for fear of bullying comments which would hurt their feelings.
October 26, 2020
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Khaled Bassam
Language Skills
Arabic, English
Learning Language
English