Clarissa
Yesterday was Sunday and I usually stayed at home just relaxing but I had done something completely different. I woke up very early, got myself ready and went for running on the mountains. Spent such a nice time in the nature just enjoying the amazing view I had from the top of the city. Even though was a lit bit cloudy I could enjoy a lot. By the lunch time, I went home and cooked a very tasty pasta with chicken. Got some friends visiting for pizza and wine in the evening. This was my Sunday.
Oct 26, 2020 7:37 PM
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Yesterday was Sunday, I usually stay home just relaxing but I did something completely different yesterday. I woke up very early, got myself ready and went for running on the mountains. Spent such a nice time in the lap of nature and was just enjoying the amazing view, I could look from the top of the city. Even though, it was a lit bit cloudy, I enjoyed a lot. By the lunch time, I went home and cooked a very tasty pasta with chicken. Had some friends over my house visiting for pizza and wine in the Evening. This was my Sunday.
October 26, 2020
Yesterday was Sunday, and I usually stay at home just relaxing, but I decided to do something completely different. I woke up very early, got myself ready and went running in the mountains. I spent such a nice time in nature just enjoying the amazing view of the skyline that I had from the top of the mountain. Even though it was a little bit cloudy, I enjoyed it a lot. By lunch time, I went home and cooked a very tasty pasta with chicken. Some friends will be visiting for pizza and wine in the evening. This was my Sunday.
Nice work! Keep in mind that removing the subject pronoun (I, you, she, etc) at the beginning of a sentence is not common in English unless you are writing very informally.
November 1, 2020
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Clarissa
Language Skills
English, Portuguese, Spanish
Learning Language
English, Spanish