Khaled Bassam
Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph? Social media is making it easier for people to connect all over the world. It increases awarness among them. Currently, many experts in different fields are conveying concepts which people found them ambiguous in the past using social media. For instance, economits deliver economical concepts such as profit margin using visual design and other available tools. On the other hand, social media is becoming a source of distraction. Thousands of information on different topics are swirling inside that virtual world. It is becoming a tool against specialization. Currently, less and less people are able to read a book. Even they can't bear reading a whole article.
Oct 27, 2020 9:18 AM
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Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph? Social media is making it easier for people to connect all over the world. It increases awareness among them. Currently, many experts in different fields are conveying concepts which people found ambiguous in the past. For instance, economits deliver economical concepts such as profit margin using visual design and other available tools. On the other hand, social media is becoming a source of distraction. Thousands of pages of information on different topics are swirling inside that virtual world. It is becoming a tool against specialization. Currently, less and less people are able to read a book. Even they can't bear reading a whole article.
Very insightful and thought provoking stuff. Good job
October 27, 2020
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Khaled Bassam
Language Skills
Arabic, English
Learning Language
English