Owais Ahmad
With the beginning of the 21st century, human beings started experiencing a totally different way of life, and methods of socialization changed dramatically. Previously people used to spend hours sticking before tv to watch their favourite shows, this was also one of the most reliable ways to get new information and know the different cultures, they also get a chance to meet their friends, family members or anyone who join them in a tv room. But after the start of the digital age, things got changed dramatically, most people like to sit alone and use their phones, for social media has almost impacted the lives of all the individuals, who have been using internet run phones. With the over-reliance on phones, some factors are shaping new generation behaviours. On Android phones most often people use social media accounts to get connected with their loved ones. But Giant companies, hackers, and manipulators take the advantage of this and they get the users to watch whatever they want to show them. Therefore, it is of paramount importance for social media companies to protect their users from any conscious and unconscious manipulation. As of now, there are myriad things that should be updated but the three most important factors need urgent attention of the social media company founders, these are: Discrimination between real and fake, Reducing the hype and defamation, and users data beach protection. Cont...
Feb 11, 2022 2:06 PM
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With the beginning of the 21st century, human beings started experiencing a totally different way of life, and methods of socialization changed dramatically. Previously people used to spend hours sitting in front of the TV to watch their favourite shows, this was also one of the most reliable ways to get new information and know about different cultures, they also had the chance to meet their friends, family members or anyone who join them in a tv room. But after the start of the digital age, things changed dramatically, most people like to sit alone and use their phones, for social media has almost impacted the lives of all the individuals, who have been using internet run phones. With the over-reliance on phones, some factors are shaping new generation behaviours. OnAndroid phones most often people use social media accounts to get connected with their loved ones. But Giant companies, hackers, and manipulators take advantage of this and they get the users to watch whatever they want to show them. Therefore, it is of paramount importance for social media companies to protect their users from any conscious or unconscious manipulation. As of now, there are myriad things that should be updated but the three of the most important factors that need theurgent attention of the social media company founders, these are: Discrimination between real and fake, Reducing the hype and defamation, and usera data beach protection. Cont...
The main problem I see is very common when learning a new language, we translate word for word the way we speak on our own language an although it's usually understandable, it sounds awkward to a native speaker. Your writing is very easy to understand, but sounds awkward in some places, but you're doing great.
Feb 11, 2022 7:29 PM
With the beginning of the 21st century, human beings started experiencing a totally different way of life, and methods of socialization changed dramatically. Previously people used to spend hours sitting in front of the tv to watch their favourite shows, this was also one of the most reliable ways to get new information and find out about different cultures, they also had the opportunity chance to be with their friends, family members or anyone who joined them. But after the start of the digital age, things have changed dramatically. Now, most people like to sit alone and use their phones, for social media has impacted the lives of almost everyone who uses a smartphone. With the over-reliance on phones, some factors are shaping the behaviour of the younger generation. On Android phones most often people use social media accounts to get connected with their loved ones. But giant companies, hackers, and manipulators take the advantage of this and they get the users to watch whatever they want to show them. Therefore, it is of paramount importance for social media companies to protect their users from any conscious and unconscious manipulation. As of now, there are a myriad things that should be updated but the three most important factors that need the urgent attention of social media companies are: Discrimination between real and fake, reducing hype and defamation, and protection against breaches of users' data. Cont...
Feb 11, 2022 9:46 PM
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