Mari Kim
Married life is not always a romantic fairy tale. With happiness come many other things to take care of. Many other things to take care of come with happiness. Once you get married, the number of family events doubles. Also, we had a baby just one year later. At first, we were so happy simply about having a baby, but it didn’t take long before reality started to kick in. The constant hungry cries of the baby in the middle of the night take a toll on our sleep. When we go on a trip or even just step outside, being together with a baby demands lots of care and attention. Taking care of a child has been constantly hard and challenging since it’s my first time doing so. Could you please make my draft sound more natural? Thank for your time and help.
Feb 13, 2022 1:57 AM
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Married life is not always a romantic fairy tale. With happiness comes many other things to take care of. Many other things to take care of come with happiness. Once you get married, the number of family events doubles. Also, we had a baby just one year later. At first, we were so happy about simply having a baby, but it didn’t take long before reality started to kick in. The constant hungry cries of the baby in the middle of the night take a toll on our sleep. When we go on a trip or even just step outside, the baby demands lots of care and attention. Taking care of a child has been constantly hard and challenging since it’s my first time doing so. Could you please make my draft sound more natural? Thank for your time and help.
Feb 13, 2022 3:56 PM
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