Anna Permyakova
A portrait with a candle Most of all, I like taking portraits with natural light or candles' light. Last Sunday I took this portrait of my son and our cat (please, see it in the attached file). The candle is the only light source. My son worked as a photo model, he is earning money for his list to buy. The cat was very curious and burnt her whiskers a little, unfortunately. As it says, art requires sacrifices.
Jan 29, 2022 9:57 AM
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A portrait with a candle I like taking portraits with natural light or by candlelight. Last Sunday I took this portrait of my son and our cat (please, see it in the attached file). The candle is the only light source. My son worked as a photographer’s model, he is earning money for his list of things to buy. The cat was very curious and burnt her whiskers a little, unfortunately. As we say, art requires sacrifice.
Jan 29, 2022 1:24 PM
A portrait with a candle Most of all, I like taking portraits with natural light or candles' light. Last Sunday I took this portrait of my son and our cat (please, see the attached file). The candle is the only light source. My son worked as a photo model, he is earning money for his list to buy. The cat was very curious and burnt her whiskers a little, unfortunately. As it says, art requires sacrifices.
Hi! You should whether remove the preposition in, it's a cliche phrase "see the attached file", or change the verb to another one, for example, the verb "to find" fits right in (you can find it in the attached file). Well done!
Jan 29, 2022 10:18 AM
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