John
Q. Where is your home town. My home town is a small town, in kimhae. It is a city near Busan, Busan is famous in korea, so everyone have heard of it. However, my home town is rural, the small percent of people know it. My home town has not only immense rice fields but also many inderstrial parks.
Jan 31, 2022 9:14 AM
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Q. Where is your home town. My home town is a small town, in Kimhae. It is near Busan, which is famous in korea: everyone has heard of it. However, only a few people realise that my home town is rural. It has not only immense rice fields, but also many inderstrial parks.
Well done John!👍 Towns are not the same as cities: they are smaller. Try to avoid repeating words, see how you can replace them with others e.g. pronouns...🙂
Jan 31, 2022 9:48 AM
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