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Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it.
Mar 1, 2021 5:30 AM
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Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on. Which hobbies are most beneficial? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should prioritize. First those that are beneficial to our health, and secondly those that improve our knowledge and skills. Both are meaningful. Be careful about choosing your hobbies. If they are not bringing you benefits to your body or your knowledge and skills, you should consider whether you should continue.
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March 1, 2021
Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should prioritize. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit.
Well done
March 1, 2021
Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, are hobbies more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it or not.
Good usage of language, some places need improvement. Can become better with practice. 4.5/5
March 1, 2021
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