Guido Bogart
the today day I talked with my partner of the class to see her the day saturday and deliver the hamster so she can take care of him for me, She is very excited because she likes hamster a lot She told me that she also likes puppies and that they have one at home I think she will take very good care the hamster tha's why i decide to give it to her It would be great if you can help me with my grammar to learn more about how to write, you can ask me about the culture of Mexico and places you can visit, thanks
Feb 18, 2022 4:09 AM
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Today I talked with my class partner to see her on Saturday and deliver the hamster, so she can take care of him for me, She is very excited. She likes hamsters a lot! She told me that she also likes puppies and that they have one at home. I think she will take very good care the hamster that's why I've decided to give it to her. It would be great if you can help me with my grammar to learn more about how to write, you can ask me about the culture of Mexico and places you can visit, thanks!
Good effort! Improve punctuation, we don't write like we speak. Also, keep in mind that the subject pronoum "I" must always be capitalized.
Feb 18, 2022 4:38 AM
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