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exercise - https://www.ielts-exam.net/ielts_writing_samples_task_2/1114/ Working from home has become an option for some jobs. The ease of being able to work from anywhere it's a welcome change in the fast-pacing present world. However, it's not easy for everyone to separate private and working life when both coexist in the same environment. Nowadays, sometimes it looks like a day does not have enough hours. Therefore, the possibility of spending less time with locomotion is very tempting. Also, working from anywhere meant for some that they could also live anywhere. This includes not only people that live in different cities, or countries, then the main-office of their employer, but also people that decided they could use that to know the world. Nevertheless, working and living in the same place means that the division between both sides of life becomes hazy. If your house is your work environment, it can rise a situation in which you need to stop your job duties to help your children, do the laundry or open the door. Furthermore, the opposite can happen too. It's never pleasant to answer a work call during lunch or in the shower. Taking everything into consideration, there are pros and cons, but, with the right work-life balance, it's possible to work from home. It has become quite a good solution in the 2020 pandemics. Yet, some jobs are not really fit for that remote employment. Therefore, equilibrium is not the only important thing, a wise consideration of each job responsibilities also is.
Feb 20, 2021 12:54 PM
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exercise - https://www.ielts-exam.net/ielts_writing_samples_task_2/1114/ Working from home has become an option for some jobs. The ease of being able to work from anywhere is a welcome change in the fast-paced present world. However, it's not easy for everyone to separate their private and working life when both coexist in the same environment. Nowadays, sometimes it looks like a day does not have enough hours. Therefore, the possibility of spending less time commuting (this is the correct for travel to/from work) is very tempting. Also, working from anywhere means for some that they could also live anywhere. This includes not only people who live in different cities, or countries, than the main-office of their employer, but also people who decided they could use this opportunity to discover the world. Nevertheless, working and living in the same place means that the division between both sides of life becomes hazy. If your house is your work environment, it can lead to a situation in which you need to stop your job duties to help your children, do the laundry or open the door. Furthermore, the opposite can happen too. It's never pleasant to answer a work call during lunch or in the shower. Taking everything into consideration, there are pros and cons, but, with the right work-life balance, it's possible to work from home. It has become quite a good solution in the 2020 pandemic. Yet, some jobs are not really fit for remote employment. Therefore, equilibrium is not the only important thing, a wise consideration of job responsibilities also is.
Well done. You discussed the advantages and disadvantages. Just a few vocab changes. Also if you are talking about people use 'who' not 'that'. You could also shorten your introduction and conclusion so you can add another idea in each of your body paragraphs.
Feb 20, 2021 8:21 PM
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