Jose P
Could someone check this email and make it sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. Hello Sorry I wasn't able to get back to you sooner.We were looking over the prices and saw it would be more cheaper to buy locally in Spain Buying items locally when feasible is preferred.Among the various reasons for buying locally some are listed below Firstly , saving time is always going to be beneficial ; secondly , ensuring timely delivery of consignment ; and thirdly , saving freight charges I hope that answers all your questions
Feb 21, 2021 7:36 AM
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Could someone check this email and make it sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. Dear Sir/Madam Thank you for your recent enquiry. I apologise for the delayed response. In order to answer your questions, we have looked at the prices in more depth and realise it would be far cheaper to buy locally in Spain. Buying items locally, when feasible, is recommended. Our reasons for buying locally are as follows: - Firstly, you will save time; - secondly, you can expect quicker response times in the delivery of your consignment; and - thirdly, you will save on freight charges. I trust the above is clear and sufficiently answers your questions. However, should you have further concerns, please do not hesitate to contact us again.
José, ¿cómo estás? My first impression when I read your exercise was that grammatically, overall, your sentence structure and English are good. However, minor changes were needed. Always remember to place commas in long sentences, where necessary to allow it to flow better. As this is a professional letter, it needed a better look and hope you are content with the amendments I have made. You are doing well. 😊 Keep practising. All the best.
Feb 21, 2021 8:52 AM
Could someone check this email and make it sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. Hello. Sorry I wasn't able to get back to you sooner.We were looking over the prices and saw it would be cheaper to buy locally in Spain. Buying items locally when feasible is preferred.Among the various reasons for buying locally, some are listed below Firstly , saving time is always going to be beneficial ; secondly , ensuring timely delivery of consignment ; and thirdly , saving freight charges. I hope that answers all your questions.
Feb 21, 2021 8:14 AM
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Jose P
Language Skills
English, Spanish
Learning Language
English