hadjer
I love weekend activities. I feel i'm free, enjoying things without roles or controls. However the weekend is just two days, i spend all the week make plans to have fun. I like traveling with family, trying a new things, relaxing in nature sounds, and discovert the facinating places in my city... The next weekend, i will be working in a hospital as a volunteer. I'm really exciting for this experience, however i'm not a doctor, i feel that i can help the patients with small things as playing with children, smiling to people so powerful to them. I used to be a volunteer and every time i do that makes me happier and remembers me that health is the greatest gift. My grandmother was every friday cooking to her neighobors for no reasons, just to see the happiness the smile in thier face. From her i learned that if i want to be happy i should give happiness to others. I can't wait for the weekend to begin!
Feb 21, 2021 7:23 PM
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I love weekend activities. I feel like I’m free and able to enjoy things without responsibilities (roles sounds a bit weird) or controls. Although the weekend is just two days, I spend all week making plans to have fun on the weekend. (I’m not sure if you meant you spend the week making plans for the weekend) I like traveling with my family, trying new things, relaxing with nature sounds, and discovering the fascinating places in my city. Next weekend, I will be working in a hospital as a volunteer. I'm really excited for this experience. Although, I’m not a doctor, I feel that I can help the patients with small things such as playing with children and smiling to people which can be so powerful to them. I used to be a volunteer and every time i volunteer it makes me happier and reminds me that health is the greatest gift. My grandmother would every Friday cook for her neighbours/neighbors for no reason, simply to see their happiness and a smile on their face. From her, I learned that if I want to be happy, I should give happiness to others. I can't wait for the weekend to begin!
Good job! That’s so nice of you to volunteer. So with the word however, I think you can’t use it at the beginning of the sentence. Use it in the middle. This sentence is right. Ex: I like shopping however it costs a lot of money. This sentence is wrong. However I like shopping it costs a lot of money. (This does not make sense) In place of however at the beginning of a sentence, use although!! You can use this at the beginning or middle. These two sentences below are correct. “Ex: I like shopping although it costs a lot of money. Although, I like shopping it costs a lot of money. Hope I helped. :)
Feb 27, 2021 1:39 AM
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hadjer
Language Skills
Arabic, English, French, Italian
Learning Language
English