Cinthya
I could talk about all my family but this time I just want to talk about my little nephew. He is almost five years old and is an incredible kid. I love to spend time with him because we always have funny moments. He brakes my routine or activities to do on Sunday. For example, today I was going to clean and study, instead we rode the bikes and now we are watching a movie, Transformes to be exact and although I am not a Transformes fan, who am I to say "no" to him? 🤷‍♀️ I suppos that be the favorite aunt is to say "yes" to everything he wants, well almost everything because it's also important to keep respect and rules. Anyways he is one of the most little humans in my life.
Feb 21, 2021 9:22 PM
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I could talk about all my family but this time I just want to talk about my little nephew. He is almost five years old and is an incredible kid. I love to spend time with him because we always have funny moments. He breaks my routine of activities to do on Sunday. For example, today I was going to clean and study but instead we rode bikes and now we are watching a movie; Transformes to be exact and although I am not a Transformes fan, who am I to say "no" to him? 🤷‍♀️ I suppose that to be the favorite aunt is to say "yes" to everything he wants, well almost everything because it's also important to keep respect and rules. Anyway he is one of the most important little humans in my life.
Good writing again. You should keep saying yes to your nephew. It sounds like a fun Sunday!
Feb 21, 2021 10:10 PM
I could talk about all my family but this time I just want to talk about my little nephew. He is almost five years old and is an incredible kid. I love to spend time with him because we always have funny moments (together). He breaks my routine or activities to do on Sunday (1). For example, today I was going to clean and study, instead we rode the bikes and now we are watching a movie, Transformers to be exact and although I am not a Transformers fan, who am I to say "no" to him? 🤷‍♀️ I suppose that to be the favorite aunt is to say "yes" to everything he wants, well almost everything because it's also important to maintain (2) respect and rules. Anyway, (3) he is one of the most (4) little humans in my life.
It sounds like he really enjoys it too! 🙂. Your text is very good and I only have a few minor points: (1) This sentence doesn’t quite work, although the meaning is clear 🙂. You could say “He tears up my plans for Sundays / my Sunday routine” or “He rewrites my Sundays” or “He scuppers my Sunday plans/routine”. I quite like the “rewrite” one as it sounds positive rather than negative. (2) I think “maintain” works better here, I think it suggests continuity and upkeep. (3) “Anyways” is sometimes said, but it is very informal. (4) Do you mean “best” rather than “most”?
Feb 21, 2021 9:40 PM
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Cinthya
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English, French, Italian, Spanish
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English, French, Italian