Ruth and Jim
In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? In recent years, many people use computers, the internet and smartphones so that people can work from home. Especially this two years, because of COVID-19 more and more people can’t go outside, need to work from home. According to this background, discuss the advantages and disadvantages. The benefit of working from home, first is to avoid infection and protect themselves, second is more convenience to working. Such as COVID-19 spread by droplet infection, when people stay at home is more safe. In some nations, the government limits people from staying at home. So that, when people live in different places, they can browse the internet to break the area limits. But if people only stay at home, it will decrease relationships and increase time to conversation. First, because when people don't have the same environment and chatting, that will decrease relationships. For example: some people will eat lunch together when they work at the same place. Second, if the internet is not good, the delay will make people angry and increase time to wait. I think that if someday the internet is more popular and useful, the advantages will more than the disadvantages. And all the people working at home are possible.
Feb 22, 2021 12:41 PM
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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With the increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? In recent years, many people use computers, the internet and smartphones so that they can work from home. Especially these last two years, because COVID-19 means that more and more people can’t go outside and need to work from home. According to this background, discuss the advantages and disadvantages. (You don't need this sentence) The first benefit of working from home is to avoid infection and protect themselves. Secondly it is more convenient for working. Such as COVID-19 is spread by droplet infection, when people stay at home it is safer. In some nations, the government limits people to staying at home. So that, when people live in different places, they can browse the internet to stay in contact. But if people only stay at home, it will decrease relationships and time for conversations. First, because when people don't have the same environment and chat, that will decrease relationships. For example: some people will eat lunch together when they work at the same place. Second, if the internet is not good, the delay will make people angry and increase waiting time. I think that if someday the internet is more popular and useful, the advantages will more than the disadvantages. And it will be possible for everyone to work at home.
Well done, this is good. You arrange it well. Introduction, clear advantages, clear disadvantages, conclusion. Nice!
Feb 22, 2021 2:55 PM
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Ruth and Jim
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Hakka), Chinese (Taiwanese), English
Learning Language
English