Nan
I get up at 6.30 am. I go to my workplace by train, and I take the train at 8.00 am. The train station not far from my house. I can walk to the train station for 5 minutes. I arrive at my workplace at about 8.30 am. I spent most of my time working because I have many things to do. I usually leave my office quite late. I usually arrive at my house around 6.30-7 pm. After that, I exercise at the gym for 30 minutes and then I take a shower. After that, I practice English until 5 pm., and I go to bed at 5.30 pm.
Oct 11, 2020 3:25 PM
Corrections · 1
I get up at 6.30 am. I go to my workplace by train, and I take the train at 8.00 am. The train station is not far from my house. I can walk to the train station for 5 minutes. I arrive at my workplace at about 8.30 am. I spent most of my time working because I have many things to do. I usually leave my office quite late. I usually arrive at my house around 6.30-7 pm. After that, I exercise at the gym for 30 minutes and then I take a shower. After that, I practice English until 5 pm., and I go to bed at 5.30 pm.
Grammar wise it is great. Depending on the context for telling such a story, I might consider revising the content though. For example, you spend about 40% of the story to tell what happens roughly between 8 and 8:30 am every morning, but you barely say anything about major part of you day...work. Of course, maybe the context required to emphasize your getting from home to work in the morning :) Btw, time references in the last sentence are broken.
October 11, 2020
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Nan
Language Skills
English, Thai
Learning Language
English