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Three Line a Day 201011 I was thinking about this lady who was talking about wanting to be able to speak English. But she doesn't think she'll make it. She said that she isn't as hard working as I am. I've heard that a lot. And I always tell them that I don't think it's a matter of hard working. I'm very lazy person,but I study English because I want the skill very much. If stop drinking beer would make me fluent in English in stead of studying,I would.(It wouldn't.so I will never stop😆) I believe,language skill is something that you get it as long as you study. I don’t think that she wanted it strong enough to get to it. When it comes to go on a diet,I am in the same position as she is. I know I should stop snacking,but I guess I don’t want to do it strong enough to do it. I wonder if it make sense.
Oct 11, 2020 4:57 PM
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Three Line a Day 201011 I was thinking about this lady who was talking about wanting to be able to speak English. But she doesn't think she'll make it. She said that she wasn’t as hard working as I was. I've heard that a lot. And I always tell them that I don't think it's a matter of hard working. I'm very lazy person,but I study English because I badly desire the skill. If stop drinking beer would make me fluent in English in stead of studying,I would.(It wouldn't.so I will never stop😆) I believe,language skill is something that you can pursue it as long as you study. I don’t think that she wanted it strong enough to master it. When it came to go on a diet,I was in the same position as she is now. I knew I should stop snacking,but I believe I didn’t want it strong enough in order to do it. I wonder if it makes sense.
Hope that my correction helps abit
October 11, 2020
Three Line a Day 201011 I was thinking about this lady who was talking about wanting to be able to speak English. But she doesn't think she'll make it. She said that she isn't as hard working as I am. I've heard that a lot. And I always tell them that I don't think it's a matter of hard working. I'm very lazy person,but I study English because I want the skill very much. If stop drinking beer would make me fluent in English in stead of studying,I would.(It wouldn't.so I will never stop😆) I believe,language skill is something that you get it as long as you study. I don’t think that she wanted it bad enough to get to it. When it comes to going on a diet,I am in the same position as she is. I know I should stop snacking,but I guess I don’t want to do it bad enough to do it. I wonder if it make sense.
This makes perfect sense 🙌 and I completely agree. I only made a few corrections to make it sound more natural but you were perfectly understood.
October 11, 2020
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mina
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English