Kanae
Could someone please correct my English and tell me a more natural way to say that following sentences? I finished watching season 3 of Stranger Things today. It was magnificent and I couldn't stop crying at end of the story. I think Jim Hopper is clumsy but he has a really kind heart and really loves Eleven, I really like him and all of the characters.I can't wait for season 4.😭 Japanese 今日Stranger Thingsのシーズン3を見終えました。本当に最高で、最後の方は泣くのをこらえることができなかった。ジムホッパーは不器用だけど、本当に優しい人でエルを心から愛してると思います。ホッパーと皆が大好きです。シーズン4が待ちきれないです。
Oct 15, 2020 9:23 AM
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Could someone please correct my English and tell me a more natural way to say that following sentences? I finished watching season 3 of Stranger Things today. It was magnificent and I couldn't stop crying at end of the story. I think Jim Hopper is clumsy but he has a really kind heart and really loves Eleven, I really like him and all of the characters.I can't wait for season 4.😭 Japanese 今日Stranger Thingsのシーズン3を見終えました。本当に最高で、最後の方は泣くのをこらえることができなかった。ジムホッパーは不器用だけど、本当に優しい人でエルを心から愛してると思います。ホッパーと皆が大好きです。シーズン4が待ちきれないです。
Well done🤞
October 15, 2020
Could someone please correct my English and tell me a more natural way to say that following sentences? I just finished watching season 3 of Stranger Things today. It was magnificent and I couldn't stop crying by the end. I think Jim Hopper is clumsy but he has a really kind heart and really loves Eleven. I really like him and all of the characters. I can't wait for season 4.😭 Japanese 今日Stranger Thingsのシーズン3を見終えました。本当に最高で、最後の方は泣くのをこらえることができなかった。ジムホッパーは不器用だけど、本当に優しい人でエルを心から愛してると思います。ホッパーと皆が大好きです。シーズン4が待ちきれないです。
Hey, I've added edits that make it sound more natural as requested. But, your original was still accurate so these changes do not necessarily mean that you're grammar was wrong! I hope that makes sense. I can't wait for season 4 either!
October 15, 2020
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Kanae
Language Skills
English, Japanese
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English