Nancy Logan
I have a loving family. There 4 of us. My father, mother, sister and me. My father is a head of the family. He used to be a hard working person, but now he's retiree. He loves play jokes on me and tell the stories. Unfortunately he diversed with my mom when i was a child, but our relationship still strong. He is the best dad ever. My mom is an elderly woman but still energetic and fashion. She is wise and well skilled mom. I have learned from her quite a lot. She is the main adviser in my life. She used to be a confectioner, so my life was full of sweetness. The best thing I love of her is she remembers all events and always prepared to celebrate. My older sister is my idol. She is tall and gorgeous. She ran a model agency and won a number of contexts. She used to be a lawyer but now she is on maternity. Yeah, I have got a nephew. Despite we all live separately, we always in touch with one another. My family is number one.
Oct 18, 2020 11:57 AM
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I have a loving family. There are 4 /four of us : my father, mother, sister and me /myself. My father is the head of the family. He used to work hard [be a hard-working person], but now he's retired. He loves to play jokes on me and tell stories. Unfortunately he [diversed with] divorced my mom when I was a child, but our relationship is still strong. He is the best dad ever. My mom is elderly but still energetic and fashionable. She is wise and well-skilled /talented. I have learned [from her quite] a lot from her. She is my main adviser [in my life]. She used to be a confectioner, so my life was full of sweetness. The best thing I love about her is that she remembers all events and is always prepared to celebrate them. My older sister is my idol. She is tall and gorgeous /beautiful. She ran a model agency and won a number of [contexts] contests /competitions. She used to be a lawyer but now she is on maternity. Yeah, I have got a nephew. Despite us all living separately, we are always in touch with one another. My family is number one.
Well-written ! You are lucky to have such a good family.
November 19, 2020
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