Taya
Hello. I want to tell you about my day. I get up at one p.m. and I go to eat. Than I wash my face and clean my teeth. I dress and go to walk with my dog at two p.m. After I watch videos on YouTube. Sometimes I draw or playing ukulele. I have lunch at three-four p.m. I cross stitching free time. I help my nieces with them homework at six p.m. After I go to walk with my dog again. I have dinner at eight p.m. Then I read something. I clean my teeth, wath my face and go to bed at ten or eleven p.m. P.S. Yes, I sleep too much from my medicaments. P.P.S. Thank you for read this. Goodbye.
Oct 19, 2020 7:25 PM
Corrections · 3
Hello. I want to tell you about my typical day. I get up at one p.m. and I eat. Than I wash my face and brush my teeth. I dress [more modern is - I get dressed] and then I go for a walk with my dog [or - I walk my dog - or - I take my dog for a walk] at two p.m. Afterwards, I watch videos on YouTube. Sometimes I draw or play my ukulele. I have lunch at three-four p.m. I cross stitch in my free time. I help my nieces with their homework at six p.m. Afterwards, I go for another walk with my dog. I have dinner at eight p.m. Then I read something. I brush my teeth, wash my face and go to bed at ten or eleven p.m. P.S. Yes, I sleep too much because of my medication. P.P.S. Thank you for reading this. Goodbye.
October 20, 2020
Hello, I want to tell you about my day. I get up at 1 p.m. and I go to eat. Than I wash my face and clean my teeth. I get dress, and then take my dog for a walk at 2 p.m., after I watch videos on YouTube. Sometimes I draw or playing ukulele. I have lunch at three-four p.m. I cross stitch in my free time. I go to walk with my dog again before I help my nieces with their homework at 6 p.m. After that I have dinner at eight p.m. Then I read something. I clean my teeth, wath my face and go to bed at 10 or 11p.m. P.S. Yes, I sleep too much from my medicaments. P.P.S. Thank you for reading this. Goodbye.
Good Job! Glad to hear your making good use of different activities during the pandemic. I would say take advantage of transitional words throughout your writing.
October 19, 2020
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Taya
Language Skills
English, Russian
Learning Language
English