Nan
I just want to write down what’s on my mind right now and if you don’t mind please help me correct it.. I want to discuss about nature and places such as mountains, lakes, roads, and Venise and its architecture. Other day I took a lot of picture and video of mountains. They are really beautiful. I also watched a video about Venise. It said a few things about Venise and its history. I amazed by the architecture and the city itself. I want to go to a lake near my house. But because of current weather which is always rain, it’s difficult to go outside let alone to go to the lake..
Feb 11, 2022 5:28 PM
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I just want to write down what’s on my mind right now and, if you don’t mind, please help me correct it. I want to discuss nature and places such as mountains, lakes, roads, and Venice and its architecture. The other day I took a lot of pictures and videos of mountains. They are really beautiful. I also watched a video about Venice. It said a few things about Venice and its history. I was amazed by the architecture and the city itself. I want to go to a lake near my house. But, because of the current weather, which is constant/continuous rain, it’s difficult to go outside, let alone to go to the lake.
Great writing, Nan. Hope the corrections help. (^_^)
Feb 11, 2022 6:58 PM
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