Jose P
Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary No offense to dog lovers, but I prefer cats over dogs. I think cats are quieter and cleaner while the dogs are more energetic and it's very stressful to take care of them. for example my brother had a cat called Francis which he loved very much and had looked after since he was born. I feel relaxed when I paint. It quiets and relaxes my mind. I like watching Youtube videos , specially about English Phonetics. My name is Francisco but you can call me Paco if you like. Everybody knows me under that name. Both of my surnames are really uncommon in Spain. My first surname is from my father, Bolaños, and the second one is from my mother, Valencia. My first surname is spelt B O L A Ñ O S and pronunced exactly the same as the Italian country and my second surname is V A L E N C I A and most foreign people find it really difficult to pronounce
Feb 13, 2022 5:46 PM
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No offense to dog lovers, but I prefer cats over dogs. I think cats are quieter and cleaner while dogs are more energetic, and it's very stressful to take care of them. For example, my brother had a cat called Francis which he loved very much and had looked after since he was born. I feel relaxed when I paint. It quiets and relaxes my mind. I enjoy watching YouTube videos, especially about English Phonetics. My name is Francisco, but you can call me Paco if you like. Everybody knows me under that name. Both of my surnames are uncommon in Spain. My first surname is from my father, Bolaños, and the second one is from my mother, Valencia. I spell my first surname B O L A Ñ O S and pronounce it like Italian. My second surname is V A L E N C I A, and most foreign people find it difficult to pronounce.Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary No offense to dog lovers, but I prefer cats over dogs. I think cats are quieter and cleaner while the dogs are more energetic and it's very stressful to take care of them. for example my brother had a cat called Francis which he loved very much and had looked after since he was born. I feel relaxed when I paint. It quiets and relaxes my mind. I like watching Youtube videos , specially about English Phonetics. My name is Francisco but you can call me Paco if you like. Everybody knows me under that name. Both of my surnames are really uncommon in Spain. My first surname is from my father, Bolaños, and the second one is from my mother, Valencia. My first surname is spelt B O L A Ñ O S and pronunced exactly the same as the Italian country and my second surname is V A L E N C I A and most foreign people find it really difficult to pronounce
Feb 13, 2022 6:32 PM
Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary No offense to dog lovers, but I prefer cats over dogs. I think cats are quieter and cleaner, while dogs are more energetic and very stressful to take care of. For example, my brother had a cat called Francis which he loved very much and had looked after since he was born. [what is this an example of?] I feel relaxed when I paint. It quiets and relaxes my mind. I like watching Youtube videos , specially about English Phonetics. My name is Francisco but you can call me Paco if you like. Everybody knows me by that name. Both of my surnames are really uncommon in Spain. My first surname is from my father: Bolaños, and the second one is from my mother: Valencia. My first surname is spelt BOLAÑOS and pronounced exactly the same as the Italian country [city? region?], and my second surname is VALENCIA. Most foreigners find it really difficult to pronounce.
Very well written, José. I just put a couple of comments or questions in brackets about things that were unclear to me.
Feb 13, 2022 5:56 PM
Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary No offense to dog lovers, but I prefer cats over dogs. I think cats are quieter and cleaner while the dogs are more energetic, and it's very stressful to take care of them. For example, my brother had a cat called Francis which he loved very much and looked after since he was born. I feel relaxed when I paint. It quiets and relaxes my mind. I like watching Youtube videos, especially about English phonetics. My name is Francisco, but you can call me Paco if you like. Everybody knows me by that name. Both of my surnames are really uncommon in Spain. My first surname is from my father, Bolaños, and the second one is from my mother, Valencia. My first surname is spelt B-O-L-A-Ñ-O-S and pronounced exactly the same as the Italian version, and my second surname is V-A-L-E-N-C-I-A and, most foreign people find it really difficult to pronounce.
Good job!
Feb 13, 2022 5:56 PM
No offense to dog lovers, but I prefer cats over dogs. I think cats are quieter and cleaner while dogs are more energetic, and it's very stressful to take care of them. For example, my brother had a cat called Francis which he loved very much and had looked after since he was born. I feel relaxed when I paint. It quiets and relaxes my mind. I enjoy watching YouTube videos, especially about English Phonetics. My name is Francisco, but you can call me Paco if you like. Everybody knows me under that name. Both of my surnames are uncommon in Spain. My first surname is from my father, Bolaños, and the second one is from my mother, Valencia. I spell my first surname B O L A Ñ O S and pronounce it like Italian. My second surname is V A L E N C I A, and most foreign people find it difficult to pronounce. Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary No offense to dog lovers, but I prefer cats over dogs. I think cats are quieter and cleaner while the dogs are more energetic and it's very stressful to take care of them. for example my brother had a cat called Francis which he loved very much and had looked after since he was born. I feel relaxed when I paint. It quiets and relaxes my mind. I like watching Youtube videos , specially about English Phonetics. My name is Francisco but you can call me Paco if you like. Everybody knows me under that name. Both of my surnames are really uncommon in Spain. My first surname is from my father, Bolaños, and the second one is from my mother, Valencia. My first surname is spelt B O L A Ñ O S and pronunced exactly the same as the Italian country and my second surname is V A L E N C I A and most foreign people find it really difficult to pronounce
Feb 13, 2022 6:37 PM
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