Roger Pires
As far as I concerned it's have been amazing mainly during the worst pandemic period when we were forced to distance one of the others. Due to this in our free time we couldn't hang out or meet our friends personally so we needed to use the internet to talk with our friends and parents or to meet some new friend online to enjoy his company. Thousands people make news friendships on worlwide and now when everything is coming back to normal could meet their online friends personally maybe. Above all is so crucial don't feel alone in this world. A good friendship is able to make our lifes better!
Feb 13, 2022 9:55 PM
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As far as I'm concerned it has been amazing, mainly during the worst pandemic period when we were forced to distance one another. Due to this, in our free time we couldn't hang out or meet our friends personally, so we needed to use the internet to talk with our friends and parents or to meet some new friend online to enjoy his company. Thousands of people made new friendships worldwide and now that everything is coming back to normal they can meet their online friends personally, maybe. Above all is crucial not to feel alone in this world. A good friendship is able to make our lives better! It is a very good text! As general advice, I would try to make shorter sentences. Hope this correction can help you out!
Feb 14, 2022 7:07 PM
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