Julia
I want to thank my parents because of raising you. Thanks very much by all of my life. I grown in a poor village where all people live there are farmers includes my parents. I remembered that when I was a child, I woken up very early in the morning. I and my sister went to school by walk on the dirty road. There was a big bag on our bag. And we came back our home at lunch. In the afternoon, I didn't go to school. I and my friends went to herd buffalos on the fields. Sometimes we caught rats or fishing on deep pond or river of my country. That is the beautiful days in my life.
Sep 25, 2021 7:12 AM
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I want to thank my parents for raising me. Thanks very much for all of my life. I grew up in a poor village where all the people who live there are farmers, including my parents. I remembered that when I was a child, I woke up very early in the morning. My sister and I went to school by walking on the dirty road. There was a big bag on our back, and we came back home at lunch. In the afternoon, I didn't go to school. My friends and I went to herd buffalo in the fields. Sometimes we caught rats or went fishing in the deep ponds or rivers of my country. Those were the beautiful days in my life.
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Sep 25, 2021 7:40 AM
I want to thank my parents because of raising me. Thank you so much for my life. I grew up in a poor village where all the inhabitants were farmers including my parents. I remembered that when I was a child, I woke up very early in the mornings. My sister and I went to school on foot using a dirty road. There was a heavy schoolbag on our backs. We retuned our home for lunch. In the afternoon, I didn't go to school. My friends and my I went to herd buffalos in the fields. Sometimes we caught rats or went fishing in a deep pond or a river. Those were the beautiful days in my life.
Sep 25, 2021 7:45 AM
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Julia
Language Skills
English, Vietnamese
Learning Language
Vietnamese