Min Min
Excercise on September 23th. Please help me correct this excercise below. Thank you very much. How many hours do you spend to use Social Media per a day?. Are you addicted social media? These days, many people stay at home because of covid 19 so most of their activities are associated with Internet. Before the pandemic has outbroken, we had quite lots of outside activities like meeting friends, picnic, travelling,… but now we are not allowed to do these things. That may makes us irritated and annoyed. Internet is the only way to help us entertain but when spending much time for that, we can be addicted easily. Although I try to limit on the time of using Social Media, sometimes I almost lost control surfing Facebook, Youtube and others. Everyday, I spend an average of 2 hours on Social media or even 5 or 6 hours. That’s really bad for my health, especially eyes. To limit on using, I uninstall all of social media applications on my cellphone and don’t log in Facebook and Youtube anymore. I spend more spare time for cooking, cleaning and gardening. The size of my house is not enough for a garden but there has a terrace about 15 meter square in the third floor. My parents have planted many kinds of bonsai for 6 years. That place is really nice for doing meditation and seeing sunset. Social Media brings to us lots of benefits for working, studying and relaxing. However, if we waste our time for worthlessness, that will have negative effects very seriously. There are lots of ways that can make you independent on the Internet so much.
Sep 27, 2021 4:36 AM
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Excercise on September 23th. Please help me correct this excercise below. Thank you very much. How many hours do you spend on the social media per day?. Are you addicted to social media? These days, many people stay at home because of covid19. So most of their activities are associated with the internet. Before the pandemic, we used to have many activities outdoors like meeting friends, picnics, travelling,… But now we are not allowed to do these things. That makes us irritated and annoyed. Internet is the only way to entertain us. However, as we spend more and more time on the net, we can become easily addicted. Although I try my best to limit the time in using the social media, I tend to lose control occasionally when surfing Facebook, Youtube and other media. Everyday, I spend an average of 2 hours on the social media or even 5 or 6 hours. That’s really bad for my health, especially my eyes. To limit my usage, I have uninstalled all the social media applications on my cellphone. I don’t log into Facebook and Youtube anymore. I spend more spare time in cooking, cleaning and gardening. The size of my house is not enough for a garden but we have a terrace about 15 square metres on the third floor. My parents have planted many kinds of bonsai for 6 years. That place is really nice for doing meditation and watching sunsets. Social Media brings lots of benefits for our work, studies and relaxation. However, if we waste our time on meaningless pursuits, there will be serious negative effects. There are various ways to limit you over-dependence on the internet.
Yes do physical activities. :))))
Sep 27, 2021 4:58 AM
Excercise on September 23th. Please help me correct this excercise below. Thank you very much. How many hours do you spend on Social Media every day?. Are you an addicted social media? These days, many people stay at home because of covid 19 so most of their activities are associated with Internet. Before the pandemic outbroke, we had lots of outside activities like meeting friends(this sounds strange), picnic, travelling,… but now we are not allowed to do these things. That may make us irritated and annoyed. Internet is the only way to help us entertain(perhaps you want to say relax?) but when spending much time for that, we can be addicted easily. Although I try to limit the time on using Social Media, sometimes I almost lost control surfing Facebook, Youtube and others. Everyday, I spend an average of 2 hours on Social media or even 5 or 6 hours. That’s really bad for my health, especially for my eyes. To limit on using, I uninstall all of social media applications on my cellphone and don’t log in Facebook and Youtube anymore. I spend more spare time on cooking, cleaning and gardening. The size of my house is not enough for a garden but there is a terrace about 15 meter square in the third floor. My parents have planted many kinds of bonsai.That place is really nice to do meditation and enjoy the sunset. Social Media brings us lots of benefits in working, studying and relaxing. However, if we waste our time for worthlessness, that will have serious negative effects. There are lots of ways that can make you independent on the Internet so much.
Sep 27, 2021 5:03 AM
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Min Min
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Other, Vietnamese
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), English