happyrose
Can you help me correct the sentences? Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight,turn right at the first corner. Then walk along the street until you see a hospital.After that,turn left, you will see Cuihu Park on your right. It’s across from a restaurant. The environment of the park is beautiful and cool. You can do something relaxed there,such as swimming and having a picnic. Our friends and I fished and jogged by the lake one month ago, we were so happy. Cuihu Park is really a good place to have fun.I hope you will enjoy youselves.
Sep 27, 2021 1:37 PM
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Cuihu Park is not too far from here and relatively easy to get to. Just go straight, turn right at the first corner, then walk along the street until you see a hospital. After that, turn left and you will see Cuihu Park on your right. It’s just across from a restaurant. The park itself is beautiful and cool. There are many relaxing things to do there, such as swimming or having a picnic. My friends and I went fishing and jogging by the lake last month; we had such a nice time. Cuihu Park is really a good place to have fun. I hope you enjoy yourselves there.
Hi happyrose, Cuihu Park sounds really nice! Is it a real place, or made up for this writing exercise? Take a look at my corrections for some ideas of alternate words and phrasing. Make sure you have a space after punctuation (such as a period . or comma , ) before the next word. This is a problem I notice a lots of Chinese people make, so I’m wondering if it’s just a keyboard formatting issue with technology designed for Chinese speakers, or maybe something you aren’t taught when you are taught English? Anyway. Just something to keep an eye out for. 😊 Good work, 加油 with your English studies! Anna
Sep 27, 2021 2:08 PM
Can you help me correct the sentences? Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight, turn right at the first corner. Then walk along the street until you see a hospital.After that, turn left, you will see Cuihu Park on your right. It’s across a restaurant. The environment of the park is beautiful and cool. You can do something relaxed there,such as swimming or having a picnic. My friends and I fished and jogged by the lake one month ago; we were so happy. Cuihu Park is really a good place to have fun. I hope you will enjoy youselves.
Hi 😃 , I hope this helps.
Sep 27, 2021 1:55 PM
Can you help me correct the sentences? Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight, turn right at the first corner and walk along the street until you see a hospital. After that, turn left and you will arrive at a restaurant. From there, you should be able to see Cuihu Park across the restaurant. The environment of the park is beautiful and cool. You can do something relaxed there,such as swimming and having a picnic. Our friends and I fished and jogged by the lake a month ago. We were so happy. Cuihu Park is really a good place to have fun. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
Sep 27, 2021 1:55 PM
Cuihu Park is not too far from here, and easy to get to. Just go straight, turn right at the first corner, then walk along the street until you see a hospital. After that, turn left, and you will see Cuihu Park on your right. It’s across from a restaurant. The park is beautiful and cool. There are many relaxing things to do, such as swimming or having a picnic. My friends and I went fishing and jogging by the lake last month, we had such a nice time. Cuihu Park is really a good place to have fun. I hope you will enjoy yourselves there.
Sep 27, 2021 5:55 PM
Cuihu Park is not far away. It is simple to get there. Simply continue straight and turn right at the first corner. Then proceed down the street until you come to a hospital. After that, turn left and Cuihu Park will be on your right. It's directly across the street from a restaurant. The park's surroundings are lovely and refreshing. You can do something relaxing there, such as swimming and picnicking. We were so happy when we fished and jogged by the lake a month ago. Cuihu Park is a great place to have fun. I hope you have a good time. Please do consider booking a lesson with me.
Sep 28, 2021 5:09 AM
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happyrose
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English