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I want to introduce an extremely famous weight lifter among fitness club, who’s name is Lv xiaojun. Lv is his surname and most foreigners just call him Lv. He is so famous that when he entered the Tokyo Olympic games, a referee asked him for autograph. Because social media reported this matter, I began to search some information about him not long ago. As a result, I heard that he has won many medals of weight lifting and break several world records. If my memory serves me, his highest record is 379 kilogram. To tell the truth, most weight lifter’s figures are not in the line with the popular aesthetic standard. Many people would say they are a little overweight. But the Lv is really well-built and muscly, moreover, he doesn’t have any excess fat, like a walking Greek sculpture. What’s more, as everyone knows, the fitness also is called body building, which refer to build more muscle by doing sports and reasonable diet, especially working out at gym and lots of protein. While many people too focus on growing more muscle as much as possible and even inject some medicines. They ignored how to keep health and some of them even died young. But as an athlete, Lv never uses any medicine and puts more attentions to authentic strength and healthy. Due to that, many fitness amateurs considered him as the best physical state for a human without medicine.
Sep 28, 2021 1:11 AM
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I want to introduce an extremely famous weightlifter among fitness fans, who’s name is Lv Xiaojun. Lv is his surname and most foreigners just call him Lv. He is so famous that when he entered the Tokyo Olympic games, a referee asked him for an autograph. Because social media reported this matter, I began to search some information about him not long ago. As a result, I heard that he has won many medals for weightlifting and broken several world records. If my memory serves me, his highest record is 379 kilogrammes. To tell you the truth, most weightlifters' figures are not in line with the popular aesthetic standard. Many people would say they are a little overweight. But Lv is really well-built and muscly, moreover, he doesn’t have any excess fat, like a walking Greek sculpture. What’s more, as everyone knows, this fitness trend is also called body building, which refers to building more muscle by doing sports and eating a reasonable diet, especially gym work outs and lots of protein. While many people too, focus on growing as much muscle as possible and even inject some medicine. They ignored how to keep healthy and some of them even died young. But as an athlete, Lv never used any medicine and gives more attention to authentic strength and health. Due to that, many fitness amateurs considered his as the best physical state for a human without medicine.
Great first draft. Yes I think best to stick to medicine without an s at the end (compound noun rule). A different physique, but compare Lv to cyclist Miguel Indurain, perhaps the best physical state for endurance without medicine?
Sep 28, 2021 2:44 AM
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