Celia
Nowadays, more people believe that the best idea to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age of people who drives transportation. I agree, with this view and how to improve road safety method and how increasing the minimum legal age can reduce traffic accident. Firstly, modern society has high-quality equipment and a great office system that people can try to take as transportation. This could reduce car or motorbike accidents. Secondly, improve transportation system lead to safe trip for workers, student, and public. Finally, the government restricts teenagers drive cars and motorbikes is a great idea, because teenagers did not have enough experience and not natural enough. In addition, officials should promote traffic regulation for teenagers can reduce accidents.
Sep 28, 2021 4:24 AM
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Nowadays, more people believe that the best idea to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age of people who drives transportation. I agree, with this view and how to improve road safety method and how increasing the minimum legal age can reduce traffic accident. Firstly, modern society has high-quality equipment and a great office system that people can try to take as transportation. This could reduce car or motorbike accidents. Secondly, improve transportation system lead to safe trip for workers, student, and public. Finally, the government restricts teenagers drive cars and motorbikes is a great idea, because teenagers did not have enough experience and not natural enough. In addition, officials should promote traffic regulation for teenagers can reduce accidents.
More people nowadays believe that raising the minimum legal age for people who drive transportation is the best way to improve road safety. I agree with this point of view and how to improve road safety methods, such as raising the minimum legal age to reduce traffic accidents. To begin with, modern society has high-quality equipment and an excellent office system that people can use as transportation. This could reduce the number of car or motorcycle accidents. Second, improved transportation systems result in safer trips for workers, students, and the general public. Finally, the government's restriction on teenagers driving cars and motorcycles is a great idea, because teenagers lack experience and are not natural enough. ——————- Hi there if you looking to learn and practice English I’d be happy to help you! We can practice conversation and I can give you some tips + activities so you can acquire the language naturally in a fun and effective way like a native speaker don’t hesitate to send me a message and ask me anything! Have a great day :)
Sep 28, 2021 5:17 AM
Nowadays, more people believe that the best idea to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age of people who drives transportation. I agree, with this view and how to improve road safety method and how increasing the minimum legal age can reduce traffic accident. Firstly, modern society has high-quality equipment and a great office system that people can try to take as transportation. This could reduce car or motorbike accidents. Secondly, improve transportation system lead to safe trip for workers, student, and public. Finally, the government restricts teenagers drive cars and motorbikes is a great idea, because teenagers did not have enough experience and not natural enough. In addition, officials should promote traffic regulation for teenagers can reduce accidents.
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Sep 28, 2021 1:27 PM
Nowadays, more people believe that the logical approach to reduce the number of road accidents is to raise the minimum legal age of drivers. I agree with this view as raising the minimum age of drivers possibly might lead to the reduction of traffic road accidents and overall improve the safety aspect of all users on the road. Firstly, if a modern city has built an integrated subway and bus transportation network, this will encourage more people to take the public transport to work or travel instead of driving a car around. This might reduce the number of traffic accidents on the road. Secondly, if the government were to impose a higher legal age requirements for drivers, this will filter out and only allow more mature adults to take and pass their driving test to drive on the road. Also, more stringent driving test and exam could be implemented in the driving schools to make sure that all people that passed their driving tests are deemed qualified and have the necessary experience and knowledge to drive their cars in a responsible and safe manner.
your point two is confusing.
Sep 28, 2021 9:20 AM
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Celia
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English, Japanese