Once I went shopping in a shopping center in my city and I saw one of my old friends that I had not seen for a long time. It was a nice coincidence
Really great piece of writing! Excellent use of the past perfect 👌🏾! The edits that I made weren't because they were grammatically wrong, just that they cut the natural flow of the sentence and weren't needed :)
To step it up for next time, it would be great for you to start expanding your vocab and ideas and exploring amplifiers such as "it was such a wonderful coincidence because...."
Oct 2, 2021 8:32 PM
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