plenty :(... first your question is grammatically incorrect, it should be "Is there something incorrect ABOUT this sentence?"
Though native speakers can undestand what you are saying, the way you express it shows that you are not a native speaker due to sentence structure. Looks like a Chinese structure to me. A better way to express this sentiment is,
Two people in your life, your parents, are the two most trustworthy persons since your birth. So please cherish them always, especially nowadays.