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Fenton Benton 麻雀虽小,五脏俱全!
what do you think about my sentence? Thanks This old man don't want to leave his house,which has been with him for more than 30 years. he hold a deep affection for it and it also evoke good memories of the days with his deceased wife.This old man doesn't want to leave his house,which has been with him for more than 30 years. he holds a deep affection for it and it also evokes good memories of the days with his deceased wife.
Jan 16, 2012 11:51 AM
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Terrible. All your third person s's are missing.
January 16, 2012
This old man doesn't want to leave his house, which has been with him for more than 30 years. He holds a deep affection for it, and it also evokes good memories of the days with his LATE wife. You cannot live with a deceased person. That would be weird.
January 16, 2012
Fenton Benton 麻雀虽小,五脏俱全!
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