How To Write A Good Personal Statement In English??
anyone can help me?
I need some creative ideas
and I don't know what should I write about
here is my personal statement, can you help me please?
http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/163926.htm

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After reading it, I can tell it needs proofreading by professional. Some of the tenses that you have used are incorrect, and it needs tidying up. I would recommend http://www.personal-statement.com/personal-statement-editing.php