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How To Write A Good Personal Statement In English?? anyone can help me? I need some creative ideas and I don't know what should I write about here is my personal statement, can you help me please? http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/163926.htm
2012년 2월 12일 오후 4:25
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After reading it, I can tell it needs proofreading by professional. Some of the tenses that you have used are incorrect, and it needs tidying up. I would recommend http://www.personal-statement.com/personal-statement-editing.php
2012년 2월 14일
Warner
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Spanish
Learning Language
English