Is there any mistakes in my writing
This is my homework, it is just one paragraph. I am curious about the punctual grammar, I'll be very happy If anyone of you correct this writing, thank you in advance
We all know that between adults and adolescents, there are some differences, one of them are their way of thinking. Adults are the grown-up ones, while adolescents are one who is developing from a child into an adults. Let me give an example, for example the situation is when they buy souvenirs during travelling. Adults whose mind are wider, tend to buy many for others, such as friends, family or co-workers. It is different from adolescent which is tend to buy many or only for themselves, and sometimes they buy a few for others. I realised it when I see my aunt planning a trip, she has thought about what souvenirs and to whom it will be given. It could be due to the money they have, but their way of thinking is also can be a reason . Adults are thinking other people more and they are also tend to follow the etiquette or the rule of society . Yet, adolescents are tend to do what they like and not willing to take any burden to be restricted.