Is this a correct sentence???? "The people that jump off the platform to commit suicide really do have real impact on the people at the station. People who come across this kind of suicide can be traumatized." Are these correct sentences????
Oct 4, 2012 2:17 PM
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The first sentence has a few minor issues, mainly "really do have real impact..." you might consider saying "have a real impact" instead. Also, I would switch word order by saying "... commit suicide by jumping of the platform..." but your way is perfectly understandable as well. In the second sentence the meaning is quite clear, but you might consider using "encounter" rather than "come across" and add an adverb before "traumatized" such as "severely." Hope that helps answer you question.
October 4, 2012
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