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Anyone would like help me correct it please? I chat with a Filipino,here is the chatting record,help me correct the error in it please ,thank you . LOOKS 8:55:16 PM hello LOOKS 8:55:21 PM how's your day Me 8:55:30 PM Awful LOOKS 8:55:39 PM oh LOOKS 8:56:21 PM if you have time you can send me some qq number from the bf99.com thanks Me 8:56:56 PM Sure,but tonight seems I am not being able to Me 8:57:09 PM I am going to bed LOOKS 8:57:12 PM its ok next time LOOKS 8:57:16 PM ok Me 8:57:23 PM I only had 4hours sleep last night LOOKS 8:57:42 PM oh really? Me 8:57:44 PM and today I haven't taken any naps LOOKS 8:58:03 PM ok you can go to bed early Me 8:58:30 PM The reason that why I am still up is I just had food Me 8:58:41 PM I want to digest for a while LOOKS 8:58:42 PM ah ok That's all , it's full of Chinglish ,haha,thanks again
Oct 9, 2012 1:43 PM
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LOOKS 8:55:16 PM hello LOOKS 8:55:21 PM how's your day ( howz/how is going your day?) Me 8:55:30 PM Awful LOOKS 8:55:39 PM oh LOOKS 8:56:21 PM if you have time you can send me some qq number from the bf99.com thanks = ( If you have some free time then you can send qq no. through bf99.com, thanks! Me 8:56:56 PM Sure,but tonight seems I am not being able to= ( definitely, but tonight i'm not sure) Me 8:57:09 PM now I am going to bed LOOKS 8:57:12 PM its ok next time =it's ok , next time sure LOOKS 8:57:16 PM ok Me 8:57:23 PM I only had 4hours sleep last night = last night i only slept 3 to 4 hours. LOOKS 8:57:42 PM oh really? Me 8:57:44 PM and today I haven't taken any naps LOOKS 8:58:03 PM ok you can go to bed early =ok, now you can go to bed early. Me 8:58:30 PM The reason that why I am still up is I just had food Me 8:58:41 PM I want to digest for a while LOOKS 8:58:42 PM ah ok
October 15, 2012
Thank you very much.
October 10, 2012
Looks pretty good. Only a few sentences that are in the wrong order. 1. Sure,but tonight seems I am not being able to. Should be: Sure, but tonight I am not able to. OR: Sure, but I can't do it tonight. 2. The reason that why I am still up is I just had food. I want to digest for a while. Should be: The reason why I am still up is because I just ate some food, I want it to digest for a while.
October 9, 2012
hongxing
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English