Is this sentence natural?
Four years of study at China Foreign Affairs University has bestowed an excellent professional qualification as well as an international vision upon me.
This is from a PS written by my friend. Is it natural?
I find it not quite natural. A better one would have been "Four years of study at the Foreign affairs University of China has bestowed upon me an excellent professional qualification as well as a global vision" (global mindset would be better in my opinion)
October 11, 2012
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