Some questions about the setences. This is my answer to a toefl question. Question: Describe the problem your contry is facing now. My answer: Now the most severe problem in my country is the environmental problem. Although some of the environmental problem is a result of nature causes such as the volcano eruptions, but I believe that most is caused by human activities. The first kind of problem I would like to say is the air pollution. Now more and more people have their private cars, so the air pollution has become a major problem in China. And the second problem is the water pollution. This problem is caused by the industrialization of the city. If we don't take action now to prevent the contamination of water, the water would be too toxic for us to drink. Could you please help me to correct my sentences so it can looks more native?This is a question of spoken English
Oct 15, 2012 1:14 AM