remaining faithful or clinging?what sounds better?
"This allowed, remaining faithful-clinging to its product concept, to always have a modern and innovative offer. "
Maybe it's an add? I think it could be rewritten like this: "This allowed the remaining faithful consumers who are still clinging to its product concept, to always have a modern and innovative option and buy the newly improved product. "
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The sentence doesn't really make sense. Where did you get it from?
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the meaning should be: this thing (something I said before in the text) allowed the company to keep its "usual, classical conceptual line" in the production, while updating and adapting to modernity at the same time
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"The sentence doesn't ..."
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The sentences doesn't make grammatical sense to me but, to answer your question, the word "clinging" carries a sense of desperation. We talk about "clinging" to things that we fear will be taken from us.
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