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what is incorrect things in this writting?? Dear. My local councilor Hi, I'm Joy, and I live in your council area. I think that our town has some problems, which happen in the midnight. Always, I park my car in front of my house but, sometimes, some part of my car is broken in the morning. for example, back-mirror and tyres. One day, I try to catch them, finally, I catch them who is teenager. I don't understand why they go out at midnight. I think, the police has to llok around town in the midnight. If they had been looking around in the midnight, my car wouldn't have broken. from,Joy
Oct 18, 2012 9:36 PM
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Hi Joy. I couldn't correct your letter here, so I had to "tweak" it. Dear Local City Councilor, Hello. My name is, Joy, and I live in your council area. I am writing you this letter to inform you of some concerns in my neighborhood regarding property damage. I always park my car in front of my house, and find on occasions that my car has had some damage done to it. For example, my back mirror and tires have been damaged on different occasions. I believe that these unfortunate incidents must be taking place during the night time. I was finally successful in catching the teenagers who had been doing this terrible act. I believe that the police need to be more vigilant around the city during the night time, so that such events can be prevented in the future. Sincerely, Joy
October 18, 2012
Correction: What are the mistakes in this letter? Your address Date Dear councillor My name is Joy......., [ add your surname] and I live in your council area. I think that our town has some problems, which happen at midnight. For example, I always park my car in front of my house but at times, I have found some parts of my car damaged in the morning, like the back-mirror and tyres. One day, I tried to catch these culprits. Finally, I caught one who was a teenager. I don't understand why they go out at midnight. I think that the police should check around our town around midnight. If they had been checking at midnight, my car wouldn't have been damaged. I look forward to your reply about what can be done regarding this matter. Yours sincerely, Joy..............[ add your surname]
October 19, 2012
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