if there are any syntax errors in my abstract, and the difference between use and utiliz
Utilizing community resources to organize field trips has become an important education form in kindergartens. By using questionnaire, interview and observation, this paper selects a sample of eight kindergartens in Shanghai to make a micro investigation on their utilization of community resources on field trips.
This investigation analyzes the factors that influence carrying out kindergarten’s field trips from longitudinal time and transverse resources type dimensions, and puts forward advice on promoting kindergartens how to effectively utilize community resources to carry out field trips.
I am not sure if utilize can be used here to make my words sounds better, or it is just unnessary to use utilize here.