any problems for my sentence? XX cooperates with the most authoritative university in the domain of jewelry identification: China University of Geosciences, and also with the one specialize in jewelry

Sarah

any problems for my sentence? XX cooperates with the most authoritative university in the domain of jewelry identification: China University of Geosciences, and also with the one specialize in jewelry accessories design: Beijing Institute of Clothing Technology.

Apr 30, 2013 3:43 AM

Answers · 3

Yes, the sentence has some structure problems; you are running your clauses together, you need to separate them with "that" and "the one" is third person singular so you need "specializes", the adjective is always singular so it should be "accessory". It's a good sentence and you can fix it so it's 100%!

April 30, 2013

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