英语文章修改--English Text Revision I like spring best, because there are so many beautiful things. In spring, the weather starts to warm up, days and nights are neither too long nor too short. I hate the cold wind of winter, I don’t like the hot son of summer, I dislike mud and dirt caused by the rains. In spring, the sun shins brightly, our world is covered with green trees and colorful flowers, there are many butterflies and bees over the flowers, the butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing. Especially when you are in the countryside, you can see green mountains, vast fields and clean streams, this scenery is so beautiful, and the mood even more beautiful, we will also get lots of refreshments while having a walk in a country road. The beauty of spring makes us forget our cares. Its beauty pleases our eyes. So spring is a lovely season. Spring is the first season of a year; we can make lots of plans during these days, as the old Chinese saying goes: “the whole year’s work depends on a good start in spring.求助英语大神来帮我纠正这篇文章的错误,逻辑性,语法,词汇上的问题,直接贴出修改后的文章也是可以的。
May 7, 2013 12:45 PM
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I don’t like the hot (sun) of summer I dislike mud and dirt caused by rains. vast fields错 wild fields clean streams错 clear streams refreshments就不要用了,不妥不要以为单词高端就好了,这是是坐在餐厅里吃的下午茶才用的。 snacks就好了 forget our cares错 forget our worries 逻辑没有问题,就是句子傻了点,没什么好改的。 初中水平的作文。。。从句都没有是要用来干什么?好奇问一句。
May 7, 2013
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